Sunday, May 1, 2011

Family Member

Choose a member of your family (this can include a pet if you think it would be easier to write about) and write a piece of prose that invites the audience to develop a clear picture in their mind of the individual. You don't have to mention his/her name but you do need to work on appealing to the senses of the reader. Try to be creative in your description by utilising emotive language, similies, metaphors, personification, etc.

One member of my family spends all of her time outside. She is playful and energetic and loves to run. She is beautiful and majestic. She has long white hair that forms a curtain over her eyes. Our neighbour is her best friend who she spends nearly everyday with. Her favourite foods are carrots and apples and she is a vegetarian. She will take you anywhere and can always be relied on. Her nose is pink like a rabbits and she has whiskers on her chin, just like an old man. She always has a wooly coat and a long pony tail that sweeps the ground as she grazes. She is very quiet, barely ever making a sound and she gives the best hugs. She is my horse Silky.

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